Re: Writing sex scenes...

Justin Bacon wrote:
> 
> M. Baro wrote:
> >Yes it is important to mention vulva... because there is also a mention
> >of kissing a clitoris in a different context. And a bleeding uterus.
> >It's about consistency in descriptions.
> 
> So you're including explicit sex scenes because you're including explicit sex
> scenes and explicit language?

Put another way, she is saying, "Because this is the style I
wish to write in."  That is an unanswerable statement; it's
like saying, "I'm writing a western because those are the
sorts of stories I enjoy writing."  This leaves the critic
who does not care for westerns, period (by which I mean, in
this context, YOU) only one useful alternative:  politely
bow out, as you have nothing of value to offer in the way of advice.

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