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Bob Cunningham <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > On Sat, 29 Nov 2003 19:24:35 +0100, [EMAIL PROTECTED] (Donna > Richoux) said: > > [ . . . ] > > > Mike, that "himself" up above makes it sounds like we > > should only are about Augustus, and Livia is a nobody. > > The student is asked to think carefully about that sentence > and see if they can suggest any ways to improve it. > > To me, it makes it sounds like we should only are look for > ways to rephrase it. > > Let me hasten to add that I greatly admire Donna's postings, > both for their style and for their content. Well, I will happily put the "c" back on "care" that got dropped somehow, and I guess I'd better take the "s" off of "sounds." But anything else would just be fiddling. > I suspect she > was in a hurry to get on to something else when she edited > the quoted sentence. Let's see, was that the time the kitchen timer rang or the time my daughter needed me for something? -- est ishes -- Donna Richoux
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