Re: Site needs Critique

"na" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote in message news:[EMAIL PROTECTED]
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> Any tips for improving www.jupiterentertainment.com ? Any ideas on
improving
> marketing would help.
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I think its a little hard to follow. You sell computers, no? I had to click
around to figure that out!!!


No, no wait, you sell Entertainment services? Oops, I mean you invented a
"Solid Surface Case"?

- When somebody hits your opening page, it should be clear to them what you
do. "We sell Solid Surface Computers to the Entertainers who work at home."
(Or whatever.)

- Your appear to be running a couple businesses off the same page, and the
businesses are not complimentary. Focus on one thing at a time, or as a
minimum, get another URL for the entertainment stuff.

- I don't like the layout of your products page. Just make a list. It
appears to be all about product features. Consider phrasing your statements
re. features as benefits.

- Dump that services page ASAP. I can't think of *anybody* who is going to
hire a $30/hour image consultant for $70 to edit video, much less for
$100/hour as a management consultant. Pick one thing, succeed at it, then
add something new. DO NOT just take pot shots at forty different things at
the same time or you will fail.

I think you should figure out what you are doing, trim your page down a bit,
then re-post and ask the same questions.

Mike Turco