Re: Short comment on Indie site?

In article <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>,
Frank Andreas de Groot <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
>Please ignore accept my apologies when this is OT here.  I am a
>"wannabe indie", would you be so kind to offer some critiscism on my
>site?  This is my 3rd attempt already, I would like to know what's
>still wrong <g>.

   What's still wrong: you didn't list the address of the site in your
above posting. While this may be your 3rd attempt, most people won't
go digging though http://groups.google.com/ to figure out what the
site was from previous times you asked. On the internet, remember that
it will always be the first impression for someone, even if you think
it won't be, so make sure it's easy for someone who's never heard of
you before.

Nathan Mates

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